imma give a 4 stars for how well this works as a "smartphone video" kind of style but with room for improvement to really give it more of that "yo dis man got sum skills!" kind of hype!

your camera angles are quite good for where you're aiming and the locations Bonfie is styling in. some smoother, slower camera shake could help make it look a bit more "professional than pedestrian" without taking away the idea that say another animatronic is filming her break it down and its not Foxy with his hook hand and slight need for repairs. Like, whoever is filming this has steadier hands than someone with one hand and a bent piece of metal, and you can interpret that from the energy in the shake.

Bonfie's dance has most of the movements but lacks a certain element to really sell that illusion of her dancin and looking hot at the same time. These different locations and camera angles do help me understand what you did to do what you did so far, but i cant tell if you are using any surface collisions or any sort of physics modifiers that help give her moves "bounce". i also cant tell what you are animating this in, my best guess is either Blender or SourceFilmMaker2 (got blindsided with THAT editor's existence, thats for sure!) so i cant really be more specific about any modifiers that allow jiggle physics or model collisions this dance could benefit from. It is definitely missing some Z-Axis, up-and-down bounce movement. beyond that, i couldnt tell what else could improve the appeal of Bonfie's dancing without the Z-axis bounciness.

Thats all i got for this. Keep up the fantastic work!

XD bro the collection of approval nods really helped sell the joke, especially starting it with Michael Caine from The Dark Knight!

I don't recall seeing Critic having a seizure while doing his impression of "The Mask".

I like the calm vibe and the enchanting tempo this has! Can i use this for the Summer Animation Jam going on right now?

I had to pause when you said dick.

It was just that hilarious to me. :DD

You should be getting a 5.00 score for the quality and range of emotions you just blessed my ears with! I will definitely send you a PM about this project im working on, and i know you would be a perfect fit for some current and future roles! But not right now, cuz im still trying to get things set up.

Nori's got that kind friend vibe where the two of you meet at a local café for maple long johns and coffee.
Zin is being the combined personalities of pantsahat's version of Astolfo and an alternate universe Tom Holland who is a twink with more sex appeal and even less shit-give than Ru-Paul.

i dont know what i like more, the stickers, the lava lamp or the polka dot shading on the hoodie and hair bow.

i can see this as the cover art of a DVD box set!